Dynamic Equivalence and Pragmatic Losses in the Urdu Translation of Emily Dickenson’s A Bird Came Down the Walk: An Analytical Study

Authors

  • Munazza Mufti Riphah International University, Islamabad Author
  • Dr. Muhammad Abdullah Associate Professor Department of English Linguistics and Literature Riphah International University, Islamabad Author
  • Marrium Sayyed Lecture (VF) Department of English Linguistics and Literature Riphah International University, Islamabad Author

Keywords:

Dynamic, equivalence, losses, study

Abstract

English literary texts are widely taught in public sector educational institutions in Pakistan, where many students depend on Urdu translations to understand the prescribed works and to prepare for compulsory English examinations. Although these translations make literary texts more accessible, they often fail to preserve the original meanings, stylistic features, and cultural nuances intended by the authors. This qualitative study examines the issue of meaning loss in the Urdu translation of Emily Dickinson’s renowned poem A Bird Came Down the Walk. The study aims to identify the linguistic, semantic, and stylistic losses that occur during the translation process and to evaluate their effects on the message conveyed to the target audience. The analysis is conducted within the theoretical framework of Eugene Nida’s Dynamic Equivalence Theory, which emphasizes achieving an equivalent response from target readers rather than a literal word-for-word translation. A comparative textual analysis of the original English poem and its Urdu translation reveals that several expressions, poetic images, metaphors, emotions, and stylistic devices are either weakened, altered, or omitted in the translated version. These losses influence readers’ interpretation of the poem and reduce the aesthetic and emotional impact intended by the original author. The findings highlight the need for greater attention to translation quality in educational materials and encourage teachers, students, translators, and publishers to critically evaluate translated literary texts instead of relying on them without scrutiny. The study also underscores the importance of adopting translation strategies that maintain both semantic accuracy and literary beauty, thereby promoting a deeper appreciation and understanding of English literature among Urdu-speaking learners in Pakistan.

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Published

2026-06-06

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Dynamic Equivalence and Pragmatic Losses in the Urdu Translation of Emily Dickenson’s A Bird Came Down the Walk: An Analytical Study. (2026). Scholar Insight Journal, 4(2), 22-40. https://scholarinsightjournal.com/index.php/sij/article/view/114

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